Karen also makes it clear what her study is about in the abstract and it does not focus on predation - she is more interested in what she terms as 'environmental factors'. So we should not be surprised that there is not that much on otters and/or crayfish. A study of the impact of these on their own is least one Ph.D.
Being stuck at home i read all this yesterday and it has some interesting findings - a number of which are not new eg need for backwaters, protection of spawning areas, along with some more contentious ones such as sedimentation by cattle, tree planting (given years were spent removing them).
Overall we need to bear in mind this is a PH.D and, having done one myself, i know the author has to follow a certain structure and there is a limit to what can be covered. So we should bear this in mind when commenting
What would would be interesting a number of years on is to see how many of 20 tagged barbel are around now. Maybe that is post-doc work in progress?
BTW i have never fished the Great Ouse and am not likely to - but watching Matt Hayes on the upper section fishing for chub is very appealing.
For those of you interested in the Thames and river management general - a project near me is just starting,
River of Life
it will be interesting to see what impact it has on the quality of fishing on this stretch, above and below upstream and down stream.